Meh.
So I take it you're a total noob to flash? Finally finished watching a few tutorials on youtube & just wanted to share what you learned? Well I liked the music, even if it TOTALLY didn't fit the scene at all. Um mybe you ought to watch some of the tutorials all of NG b4 your next project. You don't have to get super detailed to make an EPIC flash. Case in point, All Your Base Are Belong To US. Nothing special at all in that classic aside from the concept & the cool tune. It's just a goffy intro & a slide show of a meme yet it's THE MOST EPIC FLASH of all time. Next time I suggest you take a cue from the cardboard city flash on front page right now. Use some interesting textures to make up for your lack of artistic skills. Hell, like none of the characters had eyes, & it was all colored in various cardboard textures, yet it was interesting over all even without a plot. Not Epic, but you get the point. Try harder, watch what other folks have done, learn something, apply what you learned. Nice plot for such a short flash though. Best of luck on your next one!