Could be a little better
This is really good, I like the beginning & have not idea WTF the others are talking about, that end is pretty cool too, not your typical crap ending. Anyway I notice at like 2 minutes in you've got these kicks going, great kicks, LOUD kicks, but before them you had these hits with cymbals & they just sucked because they weren't loud at all & then suddenly this overbearing kick beat comes in that's loud as hell. My only advice is to just play with your track & sample levels a little, maybe use some headphones when you do it. Always my problem, I make something that sounds ok & then listen to it with headphones & go OMG WTF!